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[Liquid Eternity - Ayreon]

I'm not satisfied about that. I know i could wait and work again on it but i don't know where to start. I need suggestions guys. Technical suggestion. My camera is a Canon Eos 350D and i need to learn how to use succesfully the depth of field, the focus and so on. All comments and critiques are really really appreciated. Thank you everybody for your support. A hug to ~CrowSix [i know it has been hard to put up with me that time. thank you :*]


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:iconpatrickruegheimer:
Such a creativity is amazing, this conceptual piece is simply stunning, I love it. So first to the left picture I like it very much and it's perfect for that piece. But sadly there a some little white areas coming trhough, maybe use a bit more coffee beans would be better I think. To the right picture. The idea on it is simply stunning, but I think it's a bit to bright in the bottom area, that bother me a bit.

But the whole idea and concept is very nice and I love that piece!

Another great work from you Seya! :heart:
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:iconsabergirl08:
I like this picture...
it feels almost unfinished, but I can't say quite why.
I like the way the coffee beans are spread out (I'm assuming they're coffee beans, I don't think I've ever seen any, forgive me if I'm wrong!), and I like how in the second part, they're in the syringe.
The placement of the syringe is nice, except I would have liked to see it centered, almost - because you do have the end of the needle in the shot, I'd almost like to see the other end of the needle, but I'm not sure if that would detract, so take that with a grain of salt.
I also like how you framed the set...I think it really adds to the overall look.
All in all - good shot!
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:iconrossocremisi:
Mi piace molto il concept! Per i suggerimenti tecnici sono incapace XD
:iconsmokedval:
uhm uhm.
consigli sulla macchina fotografica servirebbero anche a me!
;P
comunque, la foto a sinistra mi piace un shacco, e anche il concept.
quella a destra invece non mi convince...

<drogata di caffè io, assolutamente>


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a me piace molto :3

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grazie e non ti preoccupare, spero che da qualche parte arriveranno XD

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:iconseya88:
ow, mi sa che te ne hai meno bisogno di me XD comunque si, quella a destra è davvero la meno peggio dei tentativi che ho fatto ._.

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<3

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:heart:

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:iconmeppol:
eheheheh un'endovena di caffè! Anche a me ci vorrebbe :D Sai che avevo in mente una foto molto simile? Stavo proprio per farla con il caffè poi ho deciso per un altro oggetto...la vedrai presto ;-)
COMUNQUE: mi piace mooooolto! Forse il problema con la messa a fuoco dipende dall'obiettivo. Cosa usi? Il 18-55? Per fotografare da vicino ovviamente non è l'ideale.

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