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Liquid eternity crosses through our veins
Liquid eternity nourishes our brains [Liquid Eternity - Ayreon] I'm not satisfied about that. I know i could wait and work again on it but i don't know where to start. I need suggestions guys. Technical suggestion. My camera is a Canon Eos 350D and i need to learn how to use succesfully the depth of field, the focus and so on. All comments and critiques are really really appreciated. Thank you everybody for your support. A hug to ~CrowSix [i know it has been hard to put up with me that time. thank you :*] ----------------------- Featured in: Commentseheheheh un'endovena di caffè! Anche a me ci vorrebbe
COMUNQUE: mi piace mooooolto! Forse il problema con la messa a fuoco dipende dall'obiettivo. Cosa usi? Il 18-55? Per fotografare da vicino ovviamente non è l'ideale. |
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Critiques
But the whole idea and concept is very nice and I love that piece!
Another great work from you Seya!
it feels almost unfinished, but I can't say quite why.
I like the way the coffee beans are spread out (I'm assuming they're coffee beans, I don't think I've ever seen any, forgive me if I'm wrong!), and I like how in the second part, they're in the syringe.
The placement of the syringe is nice, except I would have liked to see it centered, almost - because you do have the end of the needle in the shot, I'd almost like to see the other end of the needle, but I'm not sure if that would detract, so take that with a grain of salt.
I also like how you framed the set...I think it really adds to the overall look.
All in all - good shot!
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